You made a few gramatical and spelling errors, but they can be overlooked. Xxx vedio 6/10. Conceptually it was well thought out… this rocks. More detail would be nice, also. I enjoyed it. It wasn’t bad, though. You made a few gramatical and spelling errors, but they can be overlooked. your implementation of it was a little messed up though. Very good story. Conceptually it was well thought out… 6 comments«12»READERReport 2006-06-12 01:55:29awesome!!! 6 comments«12»READERReport 2006-06-12 01:55:29awesome!!! your implementation of it was a little messed up though. I love all of your storiesREADERReport 2006-06-08 15:10:45hiREADERReport 2005-10-04 01:08:15to fuckgin long god dammit i got to the pussy suckin.and thats it:(damnREADERReport 2005-10-03 23:16:21NICE AND LOOOONG
VERY GOODREADERReport 2005-10-02 11:37:31Heh. 6 comments«12»READERReport 2006-06-12 01:55:29awesome!!! One off for the gramatical and spelling errors, three off for the lack of details«12» More detail would be nice, also. 6/10. It wasn’t bad, though. I enjoyed it. Conceptually it was well thought out… Very good story. One off for the gramatical and spelling errors, three off for the lack of details«12» 6/10. Although I only got 70% chub throughout the entire thing, it was well written. I love all of your storiesREADERReport 2006-06-08 15:10:45hiREADERReport 2005-10-04 01:08:15to fuckgin long god dammit i got to the pussy suckin.and thats it:(damnREADERReport 2005-10-03 23:16:21NICE AND LOOOONG
VERY GOODREADERReport 2005-10-02 11:37:31Heh. I love all of your storiesREADERReport 2006-06-08 15:10:45hiREADERReport 2005-10-04 01:08:15to fuckgin long god dammit i got to the pussy suckin.and thats it:(damnREADERReport 2005-10-03 23:16:21NICE AND LOOOONG
VERY GOODREADERReport 2005-10-02 11:37:31Heh.
