good base but needs work keep it up it gets easier trust me.«1» put a little more thought into the characters as to how they are feeling and sexual emotions. 2 comments«1»snapperboxReport 2012-08-14 01:25:33a paragraph would be nice and she should have sucked her father off in the beginninganonymous readerReport 2012-08-14 00:52:11you should format your story so it is easier to read. Xxx vedio put a little more thought into the characters as to how they are feeling and sexual emotions. good base but needs work keep it up it gets easier trust me.«1» put a little more thought into the characters as to how they are feeling and sexual emotions. 2 comments«1»snapperboxReport 2012-08-14 01:25:33a paragraph would be nice and she should have sucked her father off in the beginninganonymous readerReport 2012-08-14 00:52:11you should format your story so it is easier to read. good base but needs work keep it up it gets easier trust me.«1» put a little more thought into the characters as to how they are feeling and sexual emotions. good base but needs work keep it up it gets easier trust me.«1» good base but needs work keep it up it gets easier trust me.«1» put a little more thought into the characters as to how they are feeling and sexual emotions.
