If proper grammar and spelling had been a little better it would be a 10/10 for sure, but instead I’ll give it an 8/10. Xxx vedio my Lord, it never stops. But this story has more fucking, eating and sucking in it than any 3 or 4 stories from other “authors” on this site. my Lord, it never stops. But this story has more fucking, eating and sucking in it than any 3 or 4 stories from other “authors” on this site. 5 comments«1»READERReport 2006-03-30 00:23:54Who is AliceREADERReport 2006-03-25 11:34:19that was amazing, it is an amazing story, though repetitious, it exhibits a good story, not perfect spelling, but not horrible of anything.READERReport 2006-03-25 08:04:30this is by far the best story i have read in a long long time keep them coming 10/10READERReport 2006-03-24 05:46:07Repetitious, yes. 5 comments«1»READERReport 2006-03-30 00:23:54Who is AliceREADERReport 2006-03-25 11:34:19that was amazing, it is an amazing story, though repetitious, it exhibits a good story, not perfect spelling, but not horrible of anything.READERReport 2006-03-25 08:04:30this is by far the best story i have read in a long long time keep them coming 10/10READERReport 2006-03-24 05:46:07Repetitious, yes. But this story has more fucking, eating and sucking in it than any 3 or 4 stories from other “authors” on this site. I’m the Dick Slapper.READERReport 2006-03-24 02:19:12Im having trouble staying interested in this one, I couldnt read the whole story, too repetitious.«1»
