And yes, I DO teach English.anonymous readerReport 2013-03-25 00:01:24Seems like it was written in 10 minutes by a 10 yr old.anonymous readerReport 2013-03-24 20:42:01It’s just plain stupid to say that there is a unisex changing room at a public pool.«12» I liked yyour story. Xxx vedio Not to sound like some English teacher, but it needs some fleshing out. The “of” is completely unnecessary. The “of” is completely unnecessary. Not to sound like some English teacher, but it needs some fleshing out. Not to sound like some English teacher, but it needs some fleshing out. I liked yyour story. So fix you mistakes by proofreeading your future stories but don’t let anyone discourage you from writing more stories.anonymous readerReport 2013-03-25 20:41:26Ignore the poster who complains about an “English class.” He’s insufficiently literate, or he’d have heard the phrase “too short a time” along with “too short a season,” “too great a distance,” and so forth. Mind you, most of your readers have some college education or at least a few years of being struck across their hands by an English & Grammer teacher- so they will be the first to point out your violating basic rules… It shows a plot and good story-telling skill. 10 comments«12»m1990Report 2016-03-13 15:34:27Love itanimal99Report 2013-03-26 22:38:43if they can’t sign their name to a comment, then they’re just bullying and not offering any real help.
