Could have been a good tale otherwise«1234» You gave enough details to let my imagination take care of the rest, which I also appreciate, and which also helped get me hard while I read and saw the boys in my mind’s eye. Normally such short sentences would make for choppy reading, but you did it so well that it really wasn’t noticeable after the first paragraph or so. Xxx vedio Thanks, too for putting some affection built up over time between Ben and Zac in, too, as it showed their bond growing as they each did what they could to show they cared for the other before making the ultimate effort to get together, rather than the typical sex-right-away model that’s prevalent in most stories on here. Bravo, and I look forward to reading more from you!bry2715Report 2010-12-31 13:45:45good story but it went A little to fast for me couldn’t really get the grip on it you told it so fast.anonymous readerReport 2010-09-19 08:08:25Too many sentences. Thanks, too for putting some affection built up over time between Ben and Zac in, too, as it showed their bond growing as they each did what they could to show they cared for the other before making the ultimate effort to get together, rather than the typical sex-right-away model that’s prevalent in most stories on here. Thanks, too for putting some affection built up over time between Ben and Zac
