but good storyanonymous readerReport 2013-01-05 16:43:39i enjoyed as a begginers peice but to improve go in to more detail, describe the character e.g. Xxx vedio 8 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2014-03-10 10:20:47Instead of just telling right away what they did in the end you could have made sequels to the storyAnonymous readerReport 2014-03-10 10:17:34Main story was good but you rushed in the end that screwed up the story. but good storyanonymous readerReport 2013-01-05 16:43:39i enjoyed as a begginers peice but to improve go in to more detail, describe the character e.g. And one of the so to say trademark features of wolfs and other canine beings during sex is their knot.anonymous readerReport 2013-10-26 07:30:58Ok good story but try making it longer by dragging out the chsrstcter plotlines an action andventure drama storyline an so on an so on…basically try an make it how you would want to read it. . . … And one of the so to say trademark features of wolfs and other canine beings during sex is their knot.anonymous readerReport 2013-10-26 07:30:58Ok good story but try making it longer by dragging out the chsrstcter plotlines an action andventure drama storyline an so on an so on…basically try an make it how you would want to read it. . . … 8 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2014-03-10 10:20:47Instead of just telling right away what they did in the end you could have made sequels to the storyAnonymous readerReport 2014-03-10 10:17:34Main story was good but you rushed in the end that screwed
