I rate both 7/10 and would have been higher except for the brevity of the individual stories.«1» I both the girl is safe in the end. I am glad that she does not have thee perfact body and is described as thick. xxx sex I am glad that she does not have thee perfact body and is described as thick. Also the development of Mary as herself and not just a Sexual being in both stories. I rate both 7/10 and would have been higher except for the brevity of the individual stories.«1» 3 comments«1»Happy RabbitReport 2011-05-04 15:58:16Both Storyies ar very good as type off writing called Comparison and Contrast. I enjoyed the romance of the first and the justice of the second – THX
Fix’manonymous readerReport 2011-05-04 03:51:28Interesting dual story but I failed to determine which was believable and which wasn’t. I have always liked thick.Fix’mReport 2011-05-04 04:39:50Interesting concept – either one could easily be true as I am quite sure both scenarios have happened in real life. I enjoyed the romance of the first and the justice of the second – THX
Fix’manonymous readerReport 2011-05-04 03:51:28Interesting dual story but I failed to determine which was believable and which wasn’t. I liked both stories and feel that except for length both are acceptable as stand-alone stories. I believe that both should be further developed, either togeather or seperately.
