1)not a very good background for a romance 2) not really all that interesting, not many details. 7 comments«12»READERReport 2005-11-15 01:57:42ok i have about 100 comments for you. Xxx vedio keep writingREADERReport 2005-06-27 23:12:59loved it more more more and tease tease tesae me dont let these ppl get to you just keep wrighting more Youll get alot better the more you wright Ray«12» 1)not a very good background for a romance 2) not really all that interesting, not many details. 3) the whole bi thing isnt really called for, and 4-100) it was way too short. keep writingREADERReport 2005-06-27 23:12:59loved it more more more and tease tease tesae me dont let these ppl get to you just keep wrighting more Youll get alot better the more you wright Ray«12» do not write a story unless you are gonna put some time and effort into it.READERReport 2005-07-15 23:14:44It was a great story until you mentioned the bi thing not everyone wants to hear that, but keep writingREADERReport 2005-07-01 11:20:12Keepim cumming, A great story, but a little short like everything less. keep writingREADERReport 2005-06-27 23:12:59loved it more more more and tease tease tesae me dont let these ppl get to you just keep wrighting more Youll get alot better the more you wright Ray«12» Rates eight stars, but the author has a great flar for story telling.READERReport 2005-06-29 12:28:13Okay story but was very short…
