Read some of the higher rated stories and figure out what to do before posting again. Want more.anonymous readerReport 2012-02-12 10:57:13DBJoxt Left on my site a link to this post. xxx sex well that’s just bad writing. Good luck, oh and getting laid and having actual experience might help ;)waxoReport 2009-08-19 00:13:39that was the stupiedest shit i ever read that suckedAnonymous readerReport 2009-06-02 06:38:13this is one of the worst stories ive ever read«123» well not the lamest sex scene writing of all time, but it’s pretty damn bad. We got what type it was the first time, and the fact that some of the detail was quite irrelevant… Read some of the higher rated stories and figure out what to do before posting again. 11 comments«123»anonymous readerReport 2013-10-25 09:28:39llaP7m A big thank you for your post.Really looking forward to read more. You must be a band nerd that’s never been laid… well that’s just bad writing. Really, I enjoy detail, but you don’t have to give us the exact description of an object EVERY time you mention it. 11 comments«123»anonymous readerReport 2013-10-25 09:28:39llaP7m A big thank you for your post.Really looking forward to read more. you rush the sex scene at the end and spend most of the story on bullshit that makes no sense, then give the lamest excuse for hooking up I’ve ever heard, followed by…
