Story wasn’t all that horrible but too much “talking” through out. 7 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2012-01-08 23:50:22And I was just wndoering about that too!READERReport 2007-06-09 19:00:59awfulREADERReport 2004-09-18 16:03:08Yeah, the grammar and spelling were both really off. xxx sex Story wasn’t all that horrible but too much “talking” through out. great work«12» Good luck.READERReport 2004-06-30 13:03:42suktREADERReport 2004-06-15 16:11:13well I liked this story . . … cant wait for the next one .. Story wasn’t all that horrible but too much “talking” through out. Please correct grammer and spelling in part 2 and I’ll be sure to check it out. great work«12» Story wasn’t all that horrible but too much “talking” through out. cant wait for the next one .. Please correct grammer and spelling in part 2 and I’ll be sure to check it out. great work«12» cant wait for the next one .. Please correct grammer and spelling in part 2 and I’ll be sure to check it out. Good luck.READERReport 2004-06-30 13:03:42suktREADERReport 2004-06-15 16:11:13well I liked this story . . … Please correct grammer and spelling in part 2 and I’ll be sure to check it out. Please correct grammer and spelling in part 2 and I’ll be sure to check it out. Please correct grammer and spelling in part 2 and I’ll be sure to check it out.
