Graceful Fox Originates In China

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The idea of this story is good, but the execution of it falls way too short of hitting the mark of being a great story.«1» I mean, you have them alone for a 3 day weekend and the sex is a quick BJ and a quick fuck that lasts only a couple of sentences total. (i.e. Xxx vedio 4 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-11-30 21:46:21Very poorly written. Many misspelled words (i.e.you used “of” instead of “off” twice, “…sitting in my bead(sic)”, “gourgeous” instead of “gorgeous”, “waste(sic) band” instead of “waist band”, etc. “walking up the the living room.” , “…gave my(sic) a boobjob”, “…what were were doing…”
This is pretty pitiful writing even if you are only 14.anonymous readerReport 2013-11-30 00:30:15Started out great and then you tried like hell to end it in half a paragraphanonymous readerReport 2013-11-30 00:29:54Started out great and then you tried like hell to end it in half a paragraphanonymous readerReport 2013-11-29 23:01:05Good, but way too short. 4 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-11-30 21:46:21Very poorly written. The idea of this story is good, but the execution of it falls way too short of hitting the mark of being a great story.«1» Needs more detail. Obviously, you did not proofread this or else you should have caught the duplication of words in your sentences. “walking up the the living room.” , “…gave my(sic) a boobjob”, “…what were were doing…”
This is pretty pitiful writing even if you are only 14.anonymous readerReport 2013-11-30 00:30:15Started out

Graceful Fox Originates In China

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