9 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2013-04-18 23:39:22Some of the WORST writing that I have ever had the misfortune to start reading, I gave up quickly.anonymous readerReport 2013-04-18 20:50:29I gave up reading at the second paragraph. 9 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2013-04-18 23:39:22Some of the WORST writing that I have ever had the misfortune to start reading, I gave up quickly.anonymous readerReport 2013-04-18 20:50:29I gave up reading at the second paragraph. xxx sex 9 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2013-04-18 23:39:22Some of the WORST writing that I have ever had the misfortune to start reading, I gave up quickly.anonymous readerReport 2013-04-18 20:50:29I gave up reading at the second paragraph. now we need a sequel with th parents at home having sex while the kids are out and scooter gets the parents! @ Microsoft i agree with ya«12» Your writing ability is at an elementary school level. Your writing ability is at an elementary school level. Just plain illiterate. Just plain illiterate. Your writing ability is at an elementary school level. 9 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2013-04-18 23:39:22Some of the WORST writing that I have ever had the misfortune to start reading, I gave up quickly.anonymous readerReport 2013-04-18 20:50:29I gave up reading at the second paragraph. Terrible spelling, punctuation and sentence construction. Perhaps you can make it to high school at least.robinrestlessReport 2008-06-07 16:58:35Mmmmm…so hot…I’d want to lick her clean.READERReport 2007-08-10 18:25:59dam good story and julie i would realy like too be able to help u with that little problem TobyREADERReport 2006-10-08 16:23:06Sweet!!
