loved it.hotjohn4321Report 2013-08-05 16:59:25Good start at writing. Xxx vedio Try double spacing and separating the dialogue. Waiting for chapter 2.«1» Us quotation marks ” ” as it makes for better reading. Us quotation marks ” ” as it makes for better reading. OH do not let the grammar trolls discourage you, they don’t me. 2 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2014-08-21 23:06:59great story. Waiting for chapter 2.«1» 2 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2014-08-21 23:06:59great story. OH do not let the grammar trolls discourage you, they don’t me. 2 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2014-08-21 23:06:59great story. loved it.hotjohn4321Report 2013-08-05 16:59:25Good start at writing. OH do not let the grammar trolls discourage you, they don’t me. 2 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2014-08-21 23:06:59great story. Us quotation marks ” ” as it makes for better reading. Us quotation marks ” ” as it makes for better reading. loved it.hotjohn4321Report 2013-08-05 16:59:25Good start at writing. Also, even though not perfect for spelling, use Word or similar program to write then copy and paste here. Try double spacing and separating the dialogue. Try double spacing and separating the dialogue. Waiting for chapter 2.«1» Try double spacing and separating the dialogue. Waiting for chapter 2.«1» Write you next chapter. Us quotation marks ” ” as it makes for better reading.
