2 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2009-06-29 03:15:42Paragraphs please and learn to spell.cs1177Report 2009-06-24 23:50:13Not a terrible story content-wise. Xxx vedio But like I said, the content was great.«1» Also remember quotation marks, those make it easier to read and know what is dialogue and what is not. 2 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2009-06-29 03:15:42Paragraphs please and learn to spell.cs1177Report 2009-06-24 23:50:13Not a terrible story content-wise. That story is what can be called a “wall of text” and can be hard to read. Also remember quotation marks, those make it easier to read and know what is dialogue and what is not. But like I said, the content was great.«1» But like I said, the content was great.«1» 2 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2009-06-29 03:15:42Paragraphs please and learn to spell.cs1177Report 2009-06-24 23:50:13Not a terrible story content-wise. But like I said, the content was great.«1» Also remember quotation marks, those make it easier to read and know what is dialogue and what is not. Also remember quotation marks, those make it easier to read and know what is dialogue and what is not. That story is what can be called a “wall of text” and can be hard to read. 2 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2009-06-29 03:15:42Paragraphs please and learn to spell.cs1177Report 2009-06-24 23:50:13Not a terrible story content-wise.
