You could also try to imagine this is someone’s story that you’re reading. Keep it coming, you’ll get better as you go on. xxx sex Writing is like everything else, practice makes perfect and if you work at it you can acheive greatness.«12» You could also try to imagine this is someone’s story that you’re reading. Good Luck. The story plot is interesting, but all the misspellings and wrong use of words was so distracting that I didn’t bother to finish the story. Writing is like everything else, practice makes perfect and if you work at it you can acheive greatness.«12» How does it sound to you? First, proofread your work several times. I got so tired of translating what you said, into what you must have meant, that I lost interest in the story.senorlongoReport 2011-03-04 23:40:28I have several stories on this site and I’m glad to pass along some of what I have learned from experience. I usually spend 25% writing and 75% editting. The few errors did not distract enough to make the story less intriguing. It makes the story much easier and enjoyable to read. You don’t have to be an English Expert, but you should show some respect for your readers. Good luck.anonymous readerReport 2011-02-19 12:31:57Great start, good pacing and interesting characters. I usually spend 25% writing and 75% editting.
