looking forward to reading more from you lolanonymous readerReport 2012-11-02 20:38:57Well you definitely to work on your stories more. Sex vedio but very,very short… Read some of the good ones here, develop more character and sex doesn’t just happen that quick, especially for kids that young.«1» xanonymous readerReport 2013-02-06 01:25:50I liked it… please make it long. …Princess_jasmineReport 2013-04-01 13:56:29good story but needs more build up, storyline and character. Read some of the good ones here, develop more character and sex doesn’t just happen that quick, especially for kids that young.«1» but very,very short… 4 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2014-07-20 23:13:15good story. Read some of the good ones here, develop more character and sex doesn’t just happen that quick, especially for kids that young.«1» xanonymous readerReport 2013-02-06 01:25:50I liked it… Read some of the good ones here, develop more character and sex doesn’t just happen that quick, especially for kids that young.«1» 4 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2014-07-20 23:13:15good story. xanonymous readerReport 2013-02-06 01:25:50I liked it… xanonymous readerReport 2013-02-06 01:25:50I liked it… xanonymous readerReport 2013-02-06 01:25:50I liked it… but very,very short… please make it long. …Princess_jasmineReport 2013-04-01 13:56:29good story but needs more build up, storyline and character. please make it long. …Princess_jasmineReport 2013-04-01 13:56:29good story but needs more build up, storyline and character.
