‘Corse’ should read ‘coarse’ and there were one or two others, but it’s still good. Needs proper grammar and fiction format, particularly dialogue. xxx sex Don’t know what the bulk of America will think if they are shocked at soldiers pissing on dead bodies. …I’ve seen heads on stakes and genitals mutilated. . . . …and wasn’t Qaddafi’s dead body buggered ????«1» Will make for easier reading.anonymous readerReport 2012-01-13 22:16:11a note on Qaddafi: some poeple in Iraq did that after a public exicution I believe… a note on marrines: most are more honerable than what alot of America thinks, mostley because of the media outlets doing antiwar crap(propaganda)… Needs proper grammar and fiction format, particularly dialogue. 4 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2012-01-17 00:15:50Interesting twist to the story,cant wait to fead the 2nd installment.chocolat_eclairReport 2012-01-14 19:07:34Good story. ‘Thought’ should read ‘Throat’. . . … though it is a good storie(juded by how well its written, not by content)anonymous readerReport 2012-01-13 17:57:48Quite a different type of story…but good. Don’t know what the bulk of America will think if they are shocked at soldiers pissing on dead bodies. …I’ve seen heads on stakes and genitals mutilated. . . . …and wasn’t Qaddafi’s dead body buggered ????«1» Needs proper grammar and fiction format, particularly dialogue. 4 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2012-01-17 00:15:50Interesting twist to the story,cant wait to fead the 2nd installment.chocolat_eclairReport 2012-01-14 19:07:34Good story.
