The plet/theme of the story is great, the characters play their parts were well, and the story is pretty much error free! My displeasure was two, 1) being the shortness of the story and lack of much detail, i.e., Jake’s lack of a wife (or Phoebe’s mother)etc.; and, 2) that the story dialogue not written about virgin sixteen year old Phoebe not being consummated by pregnancy when her father fucks her bareback…at least for the first couple times. Xxx vedio Although the story is very short (in my opinion) and rather quick and precise to the point, I am very pleased with the results, of which were instituted by Phoebes’ father’s war-enduced nightmares. The plet/theme of the story is great, the characters play their parts were well, and the story is pretty much error free! Who cared for his children during his tours from the family home? Also that they got kinkierAnonymous readerReport 2015-07-27 02:35:00What Daddy Needs” – Sixteen Year Old Daughter, Phoebe and Thirties Something Year Old War Veteran Father, Jake. Who cared for his children during his tours from the family home? The author can give more detail and descriptions of the characters, i.e., names, ages of each character, and details of the much needed foreplay–gentle, loving and sensual, but not abusive–and follow through to the completion and after-glow of the consummated sexual play!
