There was no build up. Sex vedio And just way too… I can’t wait to read part 2.Anonymous readerReport 2009-03-23 22:20:52…It wasn’t good, at all. Made me cum hard and I’d rate it a 8/10.anonymous readerReport 2012-08-24 06:59:40kyle you need n to suck you dryanonymous readerReport 2011-03-06 08:59:43Not too bad of a story, but get a proofreader who does well in English, because your spelling, grammar, punctuation, possessives, and tenses have many errors, which make this story difficult to read.Anonymous readerReport 2009-03-24 13:11:15Good story! Just because you’re not an illiterate dumbass doesn’t mean that you can write a story. blunt. Just because you’re not an illiterate dumbass doesn’t mean that you can write a story. I can’t wait to read part 2.Anonymous readerReport 2009-03-23 22:20:52…It wasn’t good, at all. Just because you’re not an illiterate dumbass doesn’t mean that you can write a story. blunt. Just because you’re not an illiterate dumbass doesn’t mean that you can write a story. It would be better to find someone else to proofread it so that you don’t keep making the same mkstake. And just way too… Other than that and a little bit more buildup and detail, it is excellent.
