on to the legit stuff! Xxx vedio on to the legit stuff! plus, w/ 19 stories, well… tell me what you thinkREADERReport 2004-09-15 19:49:22john… LOL«12» tell me what you thinkREADERReport 2004-09-15 19:49:22john… there’s only so much you can do. come back when you’re refreshed!READERReport 2004-09-13 22:20:27Bug eyed is what reading your stories has done to me.there is nothing wrong with the content, but the way you structure your stories needs alot of work.READERReport 2004-09-13 19:51:32Great Story..I love the way you introduce more characters even if is just for a short time.. you’re obviously getting bored and tired and the stories aren’t as good anymore. tell me what you thinkREADERReport 2004-09-15 19:49:22john… LOL«12» I think that if i made all these into one big story, or maybe two big stories, instead of posting them seperately by part, they would get much higher ratings. you’re obviously getting bored and tired and the stories aren’t as good anymore. there’s only so much you can do. This part is rated lower than Part II ?? come back when you’re refreshed!READERReport 2004-09-13 22:20:27Bug eyed is what reading your stories has done to me.there is nothing wrong with the content, but the way you structure your stories needs alot of work.READERReport 2004-09-13 19:51:32Great Story..I love the way you introduce more characters even if is just for a short time.. Look at The Camp nurse, It is a good story, but it really should be divided down into smaller
