So your story did good.anonymous readerReport 2011-09-26 03:15:42The story had potential, then you came along and it went to hell. I did a longer comment but we had a Europe- US moment and they said i used Bad Words. Xxx vedio So your story did good.anonymous readerReport 2011-09-26 03:15:42The story had potential, then you came along and it went to hell. Should have taken some basic writing classes. I did a longer comment but we had a Europe- US moment and they said i used Bad Words. !anonymous readerReport 2011-09-25 14:27:04NIce story but needs a lot of work in Capitalization and Spelling, maybe you should think of an Editor prior to sending your stories«1» 3 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2011-09-27 19:45:08Good Story; Needs Part Two. Should have taken some basic writing classes. So your story did good.anonymous readerReport 2011-09-26 03:15:42The story had potential, then you came along and it went to hell. Should have taken some basic writing classes. 3 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2011-09-27 19:45:08Good Story; Needs Part Two. I did a longer comment but we had a Europe- US moment and they said i used Bad Words. Should have taken some basic writing classes. Should have taken some basic writing classes. Story even though had potential sucked hard! So your story did good.anonymous readerReport 2011-09-26 03:15:42The story had potential, then you came along and it went to hell.
