history? xxx sex I just assumed most people’s thoughts were choppy like mine. The choppiness was partly intentional and partly the best I could do. All of your comments are my big thing, thank you again.hornyelkReport 2011-03-10 19:05:57I liked the changing viewpoints, which at first were a bit unclear. Don’t much want the the stroker’s votes. The spacing threw me a little but not enough to stop reading or to spoil my enjoyment. I’ve been reading these for 15 months; same old, same old. The choppiness was partly intentional and partly the best I could do. I think I tried for too much when I tried to make the seperate thoughts read like dialogue in the first part. redo this in Berlin, 1945ssaloReport 2011-03-11 01:06:44Thanks everyone. Add gratuitus sex to get more votes?cijababeReport 2011-03-08 03:16:25I loved it! This, NOT. I just assumed most people’s thoughts were choppy like mine. redo this in Berlin, 1945ssaloReport 2011-03-11 01:06:44Thanks everyone. Keep writing and I’ll keep reading.«12345» The choppiness was partly intentional and partly the best I could do. CijaonehandedtypistReport 2011-03-07 16:35:46Fuck the complainers ssalo. I don’t think it took away from the story. Good writing, interesting plot, incest handled in a way that kept me reading,. The breaks with ID could help, maintain the rotation through the characters. Good writing, interesting plot, incest handled in a way that kept me reading,.
