As others have said, spelling, grammar, and format are important, but you have an interesting storyline going that you can continue to work with. Thanks or sharing the story. Xxx vedio 5 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-07-24 02:57:12It’s a good first try. It was a cute story. As others have said, spelling, grammar, and format are important, but you have an interesting storyline going that you can continue to work with. cut your fucking fingers off that way you are unable to do so even if you’re tempted to do so in the future. You’ve given me a headache with your utter stupidity you ridiculous cretin!!!anonymous readerReport 2013-07-23 14:35:15Ok a comment. But you should let someone else write the final draft for you. It was a cute story. Do everyone a favor, quit posting ignorant shit like this and leave writing to those who have at least a basic understanding of the English language. A whole lot of information was left out to make it easier to understand what the heck was going on. 5 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-07-24 02:57:12It’s a good first try. But you should let someone else write the final draft for you. Do everyone a favor, quit posting ignorant shit like this and leave writing to those who have at least a basic understanding of the English language.
