Get a good editor, not one who tells you what you want to hear, and let him or her read over and suggest changes. Xxx vedio I am glad my stories have been received as well as they have. The Ticket or rather the finding of the ticket was the whole idea. My preferences would be non erotic but they aren’t as well received.«12» It’s still your story and you can ignore him, but you need help to fix this. Your mind may work faster than your fingers, but that is what Spell-Check is for. When I sit down to write I have absolutely no idea what I am going to write. The story comes out as I write there is no actual planned plot Just a vague idea. It might be publishable, and you should try it you’re interested, but not until it’s cleaned up, please!Anonymous readerReport 2015-04-07 04:27:30I think you should make this into a book it has enough for it I mean the grammar is good and the punctuation is good all you need Id a publisher and your goodAnonymous readerReport 2014-04-16 22:57:19عÙع7هغهخ8عغخهعهمعمهعهعخهغAnonymous readerReport 2013-11-22 17:17:47I would be interested in speaking and working with a publisher. Everything else ballooned up from that single idea.
