Maybe you should rewrite in and take your time.Anonymous readerReport 2015-02-13 12:04:04very goodanonymous readerReport 2013-09-20 16:27:56I like it , but you should capitalize the beginning of sentences and proper names. Maybe you should rewrite in and take your time.Anonymous readerReport 2015-02-13 12:04:04very goodanonymous readerReport 2013-09-20 16:27:56I like it , but you should capitalize the beginning of sentences and proper names. Sex vedio Maybe you should rewrite in and take your time.Anonymous readerReport 2015-02-13 12:04:04very goodanonymous readerReport 2013-09-20 16:27:56I like it , but you should capitalize the beginning of sentences and proper names. No build um. No build um. No build um. Bin logical jumps, like parts Art missing. There is a few spelling mistakes, but nothing major. so hot and dark! 4 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2015-03-04 17:24:20Seems like written froh a tun year old. 4 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2015-03-04 17:24:20Seems like written froh a tun year old. Bin logical jumps, like parts Art missing. Bin logical jumps, like parts Art missing. The final thing is Cho is a year ahead of Harry, so for her to be there it would need to be his 6th year or expand upon Cho falling apart and failing a year after C Cedric died. There is a few spelling mistakes, but nothing major. Bin logical jumps, like parts Art missing. Overall its pretty well written with a few minor changes you could have pretty good story here.jenna-xxxReport 2013-09-18 03:27:58oooh i liked this one.
