Secondly, you used a comma where a semicolon belongs, and then didn’t add commas where they were needed. xxx sex You’re dumber than a third grade retard and hornier than three peckered billy goat. I bet when you read these here stories you get stiffer than a peter on a weddin’ night! Golf clap.anonymous readerReport 2013-08-31 03:45:15Sorry, but I have to comment on grammar Nazi’s post. There should be a very noticeable difference. Here’s a tip you spelled “cavron” incorrectly it’s actually cabron. You’re gonna give us all a bad name with with your damn nonsense. It’s also a cliff hanger which I personally don’t like. Here’s a tip you spelled “cavron” incorrectly it’s actually cabron. Lastly, you used the word ‘endeavor’ out of context; it doesn’t fit your intention, so quit using words too big for yourself. See if it’s what you really want to say. Secondly, you used a comma where a semicolon belongs, and then didn’t add commas where they were needed. There should be a very noticeable difference. When you’re confident that your story is as good as it’s going to get, post it. Before you post a story, really look at it. Secondly, you used a comma where a semicolon belongs, and then didn’t add commas where they were needed.
