but i liked the third one best«1» Keep writing!READERReport 2007-05-02 19:26:55I dunno, i liked the 3 first parts but expected more from it,
looks like the ending is written by some1 else then the first 3,
or in an urge to finnish but you could have made a book of itREADERReport 2007-04-29 05:58:33Well written, but too short! xxx sex Keep writing!READERReport 2007-05-02 19:26:55I dunno, i liked the 3 first parts but expected more from it,
looks like the ending is written by some1 else then the first 3,
or in an urge to finnish but you could have made a book of itREADERReport 2007-04-29 05:58:33Well written, but too short! Needs more sex!READERReport 2007-04-26 16:08:37You are a fucking moron. Needs more sex!READERReport 2007-04-26 16:08:37You are a fucking moron. Needs more sex!READERReport 2007-04-26 16:08:37You are a fucking moron. 5 comments«1»READERReport 2007-05-06 05:18:55Ending 3 made me wet! but i liked the third one best«1» Your writing sucks, give it up pleaseREADERReport 2007-04-25 09:39:21All good! Your writing sucks, give it up pleaseREADERReport 2007-04-25 09:39:21All good! Your writing sucks, give it up pleaseREADERReport 2007-04-25 09:39:21All good! Your writing sucks, give it up pleaseREADERReport 2007-04-25 09:39:21All good! Your writing sucks, give it up pleaseREADERReport 2007-04-25 09:39:21All good! but i liked the third one best«1» 5 comments«1»READERReport 2007-05-06 05:18:55Ending 3 made me wet! 5 comments«1»READERReport 2007-05-06 05:18:55Ending 3 made me wet! 5 comments«1»READERReport 2007-05-06 05:18:55Ending 3 made me wet! 5 comments«1»READERReport 2007-05-06 05:18:55Ending 3 made me wet! Keep writing!READERReport 2007-05-02 19:26:55I dunno, i liked the 3 first parts but expected more from it,
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